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Amateur photographer, artist, designer, who just loves lingering around and make artworks on the most random stuff she could find. May these works bring a sort of pleasure to all of you deviants out there too :3
please feer flee to drop a critique or two.
I just got back from Malaysia and shit and this is the first thing that comes on my screen. So like, meh, I thought why don't I give this one a try On the side note, it's been a while since I've read Naruto... waiting for the series to end was a pain, but I got into the series again since the gaiden features Naruhina (MUH SHIP FINALLY CAME TRUE--) lovechild and Sarada. I don't have much words for her, but I think it's good that Sasuke FINALLY decides who he wants to be with for the rest of his miserable life (?). Shippers know her mother is Sakura. I don't ship him with Karin since Karin's like a leech more than a supporter :c sorry for those supporting SasuKarin... I just can't like her (and neither does she deserves him since he nearly stabbed her to death). I'm waiting for the next chapter next week since Kishimoto is still a cheap bastud with 17 pages every chapter :'333 and hoping that there'll be some BoruSara, maybe? and PapaRuto's action.... still can't believe that dork has grown so much to be a Hotkage and managed to pull off that "NARUTO SAEVS DE DAY" move on the last chap- gfdi Kishimoto--
anyway, enough rant! here's the meme!
P.S: For those of you who missed Naruto: The Last Movie, you MUST see it. You NEED to see it- for me it's like "omagah my ship, my SHIP, MUH SHIPPP--" and I practically died at the end of it. NOW I'll stop ranting ehuehue.
1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [ ] They are physically strong.
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour. I think white or silver fur isn't considered ‘rare’ in Muromachi era… right?? I mean how long have snow-colored foxes exist. They even believed in Inari who bears snow-colored fur too.
6. [ x ] Their eyes are an unusual colour. Gold is unusual... right...?
7. [ ] This eye colour happens to be white. how is this a cliché… seriously... you have a problem with white eyes or something? I see, you must've been so creative you've invented a new eye color, oh look rainbow irises!
8. [ ] Their eyes change colour. gawdfkingdammit
9. [ ] They have wings.
10. [ x ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
11. [ ] They are immortal. Contrary to popular belief, Kitsunes can actually be killed. They live for a very long time, but that doesn't mean she can't die.
12. [ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13. [ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14. [ x ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. Being a kitsune is tough
15. [ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc.
16. [ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. no, but she can read people once she gets close enough with said individual, don’t we all?
17. [ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. The Kitsune Sphere stores 1/3 of her powers… does that count…? ;;
18. [ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. I think this depends on Character Development, so the question is too vague for an answer
19. [ x ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers. Naturally, Kitsunes have powers, don’t they?
20. [ ] They are a healer. For Ryou, maybe, even then it's not physical healing that he receives, more like a 'learning process' they share
21. [ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22. [ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23. [ ] They have lost one/both of their parents. Inari-sama doesn't /need/ a husband... come on guys-
24. [ x ] They ran away from home. Well yes, kinda... not wanting to go back home counts as this right?
25. [ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26. [ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
27. [ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
28. [ ] They never knew their parents.
29. [ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30. [ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. Even if there is a lesbo in the plot, but I don’t think she’s attracted to Gin :’D
31. [ ] They have lots of friends/no friends.
32. [ ] They are emo/cutesy. I think she's OK, but she might be and might not be to people so I'll leave this unanswered
33. [ x ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
34. [ ] They are currently in a relationship. is this like… from the beginning or from the middle of the plot?
35. [ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
36. [ ] They have a mental disorder.
37. [ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38. [ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39. [ ] They are a psycho.
40. [ ] They have multiple personalities.
41. [ ] They are very intelligent.
42. [ ] They have hallucinations.
43. [ x ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. I do believe some higher Kitsune ranks have familiars handed down to them, so yes they can summon them, but these things are also in a form of an object
44. [ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet. HE IS NOT A PET OK
45. [ x ] They have a guardian spirit. Which is said familiar, or you prefer 'pet' instead, hmm?
46. [ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47. [ ] Their soul is not the same as them. What does this mean?
48. [ x ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts. All Kitsunes do, love
49. [ ] Some part of their body glows.
50. [ x ] They have a rare/unusual name. This is a Mary Sue question? She might, from a Westerner's point of view, but from a Japanese, her name could be literally translatable so I'm not even sure if this actually deserves a check
51. [ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52. [ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53. [ ] They are connected with a certain element. I'm.... uh... i dont even know if this one is a check or not because imo the sky isn't an element, she's not even affiliated with Air or Fire or Earth or anything-
54. [ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
55. [ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56. [ x ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. For goodness sake, she does… and this isn’t on purpose. I was trying to make her look innocent and all and she ended up looking like Hanekawa Tsubasa. I need to revise her design orz
57. [ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood.
58. [ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared. Does... Knowledge count...? :')))
59. [ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
60. [ ] They are hiding from someone/something. If Gin reveals about this thing she's hiding at the end, would this still count?
61. [ ] They have a rare blood type. this question gave me a mild "wtf" just now...
62. [ ] They cry blood.
63. [ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.
64. [ ] They are from a different country to where they live
65. [ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
66. [ ] They are very lively/happy.
67. [ x ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. She's quite moody, yes
68. [ x ] They are very patient. and in general, she /is/ very, very patient. don't push it, though...
69. [ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70. [ x ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. This is a Mary Sue question????? What the fuck bro, even people in real world have jewelry they wear every day too if that piece of jewelry meant something to them. just... what the fuck-
71. [ ] They have amnesia.
72. [ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73. [ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
74. [ ] They are 'the chosen one'. Between yes and no, I like the concept but this seems too cliché so it's not gonna happen
75. [ ] They have insomnia.
Point Reduction ::
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::
1. [ ] They smoke.
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [ x ] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
Total Points Redux: 14
05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26 :: Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... NOW.
>>>> Oh yay, so Gin's quite something already I'm happy now c:
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